Posted in February 2012

Gremlins and Thank You

Sometimes those little Gremlin typos drive me crazy. I search for them. No, more than that, I hunt for them. But my mind has a way of fixing things even when they aren’t right. I know reading out loud will find them and I will be doing that with my entire MS before it goes … Continue reading

Shallow Point of View

Shallow POV is something I admit, I have struggled with. One of my readers on CC has been excellent at pointing out the areas where I slip into a shallow POV. The problem, even after several examples, I still didn’t quite see it and struggled to fix it on my own. Then today, I took … Continue reading